Medical Love, a poem I wrote...

Hi guys,

This is a poem that I wrote in first class but I think it’s still worth reading, enjoy

Medical Love

Within a dissecting room filled with formalin
A girl stole my heart and even my spleen
I loved her at the very moment I have seen

She asked for the name of a structure
But I couldn’t tell was it the radial artery or ulnar
As I kept thinking of how nicely she moved her finger

She never gets a sandwich of beefburger
For fear of Taenia saginata being the visitor
So I buy it in front of her to show myself stronger

One day I bent to get her a pen has fallen
She said, “Your L5 could have been broken”
“She cares for me”, that idea warmed a heart was frozen

I consulted my doctor who said at the end of session
“It has reached the lymph nodes, it’s a love infection.
Removal of the heart is the only option”

I decided that tomorrow will be the day
To tell her about my love that will stay
And I prepared the very beautiful words to say

I practised Yoga for three hours at least
I prepared as if tomorrow was the feast
I prayed more times than the population of the east

I had tachycardia on seeing her, my tongue locked
I forgot everything so I never talked
I just said, “Hello” and walked

Finally, with broken words and sweat secretion
I offered my love putting no condition
She said, “You weren’t in the anatomical position”

Mohammed Jaafar

this is great man! really 3ashat eedak

I remember it from first year, and I wanted to ask u to post it here, but fortunately u did it yourself, with no fear

Post the other ones, i think there were more than one.

And how about ur new work? have't u written anything new?

This poem rocks!

hi 7ammodi i remember it , it's funny till now , but why we never such beautful things in our lectures these days as the days before .
keep on good poems .

hi guys,

thanks for your nice words and encouragement.

Kadem, seriously why there should be fear?

best wishes

no fear should be present bro, but I just needed it to make the sentence rhyme


:whstle:

oh silly me

I didn't pay attention to the rhymes

GrEaT JoB .......nice 1...or the best 1 should i say

هلو
ادري الرد كلش كلش كلش متاخر بس هسة كاعد اكلب الاشعار وشفتة
والله شعر خرافي وكلش فيكة
عاشت الايادي
تحياتي
بروج

ty Brooj for bringing up such a nice poem ,
I'venever seen it before ,
and u Hammodi really welldone !
i wonder if u kept writinf after that cool one?